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Progress: 1,761 words on "Becoming"

Words so far: DONE! At 2,950 words

Made-up words: pouty, Okies

Barely avoided clichés: a picture of health

The words I'll hate most to cut: I wondered what it would be like to beat my body into a semblance of youth instead of having it already stuck there, like a cold statue.

Thank God an editor didn't see this: I resumed picking again.

General thoughts: This story is a strange little animal. Not sure if it works yet. I'm tired and loopy and I fear that upon re-reading when rested, I'll want to scrap the whole thing. *shrug*

Date: 2005-07-30 04:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] mmerriam.livejournal.com
Made-up words: pouty, Okies

When I saw Okies I chuckled. That is the term, sometimes perogatory, for Oklahomans. I used to live there!

Date: 2005-07-30 05:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] queenoftheskies.livejournal.com
Wow...congrats on the great word count and on finishing your story, both!!!

You've been very productive. Isn't productive grand?

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