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Progress: 1,177 words on "Becoming"

Words so far: 1,177 / approx 3,000

Made-up words: ain't, snorty, more'n

Barely avoided clichés: She gazed at me softly. *sporksporkspork*

The words I'll hate most to cut: She was a shriveled crescent of a woman, wrapped in what seemed like stiff burlap but undoubtedly was not, and she did not know the value of her name.

Thank God an editor didn't see this: Even so, in a few weeks she would be unrecognizable as the baby I already brought to the dock. (s/b doc)

General thoughts: I love writing short fiction. You can do a bunch of crazyweird stuff, and instead of justifying it, you just nod your knowing, literary nod and call it "experimental."

Date: 2005-07-29 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] navicat.livejournal.com
lol!

*loves Rae*

BTW "Becoming" - awesome title! :)

Date: 2005-07-29 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wine-love-pen.livejournal.com
I lurve your darling sentence.

Date: 2005-07-29 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raecarson.livejournal.com
eeeeeeeeee, thx!!!

Date: 2005-07-29 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raecarson.livejournal.com
Thx, Heath!

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