Writerly Stuff for 7/9/05

[raefinlay]

Progress: 1,146 words on Elisa's Belly

Words so far: 16,850

Made-up words: moustached

Barely avoided clichés: lots of gazing happened in this one

The words I'll hate most to cut: I am not the queen yet, but I intend to be. (and) Such a lovely, innocuous voice.

Thank God an editor didn't see this: a childlike gin (I guess that's the non-alcoholic variety)

General thoughts: Chapter 6 is shaping up to be aaall about transition. But I have learned from my Unmagicked mistakes and will shove plot into this thing anyway. Yes, there will be Scary Danger. Somehow.

Comments

[navicat.livejournal.com]

Unmagicked...mistakes? I'm sorry, but those words just don't fit together.

:)

[jmeadows.livejournal.com]

I like the childlike gin.

I'm also jealous of your fancy typos. Mine are all boring. :D

And... you mean they shouldn't just gaze everywhere?

[aaron-mag.livejournal.com]

oooooohhhhhhhh these little earthquakes, here we go again...

Tori Amos. I listen to her often when I try and 'channel' Ariana. I think Ariana would like such music.

:D

[raecarson.livejournal.com]

Thx Jojo. You're a good pal. *loffs*

[raecarson.livejournal.com]

Doode. Tori is perfect for Ariana. *laughs and laughs*