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Writerly Stuff for 7/9/05
Jul. 9th, 2005 10:22 pmProgress: 1,146 words on Elisa's Belly
Words so far: 16,850
Made-up words: moustached
Barely avoided clichés: lots of gazing happened in this one
The words I'll hate most to cut: I am not the queen yet, but I intend to be. (and) Such a lovely, innocuous voice.
Thank God an editor didn't see this: a childlike gin (I guess that's the non-alcoholic variety)
General thoughts: Chapter 6 is shaping up to be aaall about transition. But I have learned from my Unmagicked mistakes and will shove plot into this thing anyway. Yes, there will be Scary Danger. Somehow.
Words so far: 16,850
Made-up words: moustached
Barely avoided clichés: lots of gazing happened in this one
The words I'll hate most to cut: I am not the queen yet, but I intend to be. (and) Such a lovely, innocuous voice.
Thank God an editor didn't see this: a childlike gin (I guess that's the non-alcoholic variety)
General thoughts: Chapter 6 is shaping up to be aaall about transition. But I have learned from my Unmagicked mistakes and will shove plot into this thing anyway. Yes, there will be Scary Danger. Somehow.
